Score: 9

"better!"

submission: MetalSlug: BattleCreator2

date: August 11, 2008

You did it! You added Marco, soldiers dying, and zombies!
Only problem is that the music just stops. You need to make it loop, so that you got action music for your scene.
Either way, you still did a good job!
4/5 and 9/10.

~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 4

"needs some work"

submission: Nightmare Warrior Ep1

date: August 11, 2008

At the part where that evil dude is talking, it was kinda hard to understand what he was saying. Also, when he talks, his mouth isn't moving at all. If you can't do that, I would suggest adding a mask to that character.

While you have some good artwork, you need to work on walking. When the scientist guy walks, he doesn't move smoothly.

That's about it. If you can improve on work, the series will (hopefully) become awesome...

~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 2

"needs a lot of work"

submission: jill must die

date: August 10, 2008

1. You need to color the drawings, don't leave it black & white
2. No sounds, no songs, no nothing!
3. Make it easier to read text, don't just scribble
4. Add more information in your comments

that's it
~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 10

"nice intro"

submission: SonicChroniclesTrailer

date: August 10, 2008

We all know there's no preloader, so get over it.

Seriously, dude, this looks like an awesome series. Just remeber though, you need a good story for this, but if you already have this, then you're off to a good start. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for your first episode!
5/5 and 10/10!

~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 9

"only one problem"

submission: Metal Slug - War Scene 2

date: August 8, 2008

You need to add soldiers dying, but that's the only problem. Other than that, you did a good job.

4/5 and 9/10!

(as for joepimpz, you do know you're the only who doens't like this, right?)

Score: 10

"Awesome!"

submission: Luigi's hammer

date: August 8, 2008

I gotta say, you did another awesome job with Luigi's Hammer!
Keep up the good work!
5/5 and 10/10!

(P.S. Thanks for crediting me at the end! Can't wait for your next work.)

Score: 10

"I like it!"

submission: MetalSlug: Battle Creator

date: August 8, 2008

I think you need more characters to choose from. Maybe add more soldiers that can face both ways. Oh, and add Marco for sure. Also, either add more backgrounds or more music.
That's about it.
Keep up the good work!
4/5 10/10!

Score: 10

"cool!"

submission: Mario's hammer

date: August 2, 2008

good video. I agree with icecold128. Do one with Luigi. Anyways, awesome video.

Keep up the good work!
5/5 and 10/10!

Score: 8

"......."

submission: Ocarina of Stupidity III

date: August 2, 2008

I think you need to create more detailed artwork and add some music. Other than that, cool video!

Keep up the good work!

8/10 and 3/5!

Score: 10

"cool!"

submission: Mario RPG: Rawest Forest

date: July 31, 2008

dude, I can't stop watching this video! Just listening to this song makes me want to play Super Mario RPG. (kinda wish I had the game though...) And you did this in High School!? That's just awesome!

5/5 and 10/10!