Score: 10

"this deserves an award!"

submission: Sprite TV 3!

date: August 19, 2008

Like pretty much eveyone has already said, the Pikachu part freezes.

Besides that, it was an awesome piece of work! While some scenes weren't that funny to me, others were just simply hilarious!
I can't really choose a favorite, since they're all just awesome! :D

What I really like about this is how well you put this all together. Scene select, artist profiles, and even easter eggs! ^^

As for people, like newguy2005, I don't get how you could give such a low rating for this. It's hilarious, and you know it.

Oh yeah, I demand Sprite TV 4!
(and include me ^^)

Credits to all involved!
5/5 and 10/10!
~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 5

"meh..."

submission: Devlin Randomness Brawl 1

date: August 18, 2008

First off, why did you include Geno in the icon? It doesn't even have anything to do with this flash.

Okay, let's see here....

Your custom sprite is kinda cool, but still isn't good enough for this fight.
At times, Sonic was normal-sized, then he ended up changing sizes.

As for the Chaos Emerald, Sonic steals it from the other guy, but he still turns Super. Explain that.

Like getto89 said, there isn't any sound effects. Add some sound, don't just put in music. If it's a fight, you know it needs some kind of sound.
Also, like KyuubiT said, you need to put some effort into it. Make it a real fight, don't just put up 30 seconds worth of random fighting.

5/10 and 2/5
~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 8

"needs work"

submission: NinjamanZ trailer 1

date: August 16, 2008

Looks ok, but there are some problems.

First off, I think you need better timing when it comes to sound effects.
Second, when Ninjaman jumps, add better effects. Not just a blue streak behind him.

What I do like about this is the preloader and drawings.
Keep up the good work!
8/10 and 4/5.
~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 2

"needs work"

submission: all out 1.0

date: August 12, 2008

This has a Madness kind of look. If that's what you were going for, work on that. The character was just stiff. Add some movement and recoil from the gun.
I don't think stick figures and Madness-looking guys fit together in the same video.
Make the animation more smooth, so increase frame rate.

~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 5

"it is better"

submission: The Wrong Game

date: August 11, 2008

I admit, you did improve on this. The problem is, you need to make something longer, not just a 10 second short. I say, if you're going to sumbit something, at least make it over a minute or two. You could make this into a story, though.

~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 3

"how to improve (look below)"

submission: Red & Black -short-

date: August 11, 2008

During the battle, the red guy was shooting bullets, but he didn't have a gun.
Make a better background to go along with this short.
See if you can make the stick figures move more smoothly.
At least make it longer. I'd say around 2 minutes at a minimum.

~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 9

"LOL!"

submission: Disturbing Toad!!!

date: August 11, 2008

Another funny video. What's next? Disturbing Peach, Yoshi, or Bowser?
Just work on the voice acting, that's all.
Too bad e140joker couldn't be a part of this.

~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 9

"better!"

submission: MetalSlug: BattleCreator2

date: August 11, 2008

You did it! You added Marco, soldiers dying, and zombies!
Only problem is that the music just stops. You need to make it loop, so that you got action music for your scene.
Either way, you still did a good job!
4/5 and 9/10.

~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 10

"nice intro"

submission: SonicChroniclesTrailer

date: August 10, 2008

We all know there's no preloader, so get over it.

Seriously, dude, this looks like an awesome series. Just remeber though, you need a good story for this, but if you already have this, then you're off to a good start. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for your first episode!
5/5 and 10/10!

~Ninjakoopa-33

Score: 9

"only one problem"

submission: Metal Slug - War Scene 2

date: August 8, 2008

You need to add soldiers dying, but that's the only problem. Other than that, you did a good job.

4/5 and 9/10!

(as for joepimpz, you do know you're the only who doens't like this, right?)