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Hmm...

Well I can see that this could definitely help someone! It helped me!

This is a good starting point for new animators. Only thing I would have added is some background music. Although this tutorial is short, I think a short loop would have been a nice touch to add.

Voting Details: Current Score - 2.83
Voted 3 - raised to 2.84
Voter # - 226

Really nice tutorial here. Who knows? Maybe one day I'll get into Flash animation! :P

NinjaKoopa
~The Koopa Clan~

dooseyboy responds:

glad i could help, i have added some of the things that have been mentioned in other reviews.
thanks for the review

Cool...

Although it does seem to be longer than the previous episodes, it's still a little short. It would definitely be better if each episode was longer.

Just as funny as the rest! I especially love the part where the Pokemon Trainer steals the Mudkip from the /b/tard. XD

Only improvement I would like to see is in the voice acting. I could help you out there! ;)

Voting Details: Current Score - UJ
Voted 5 - UJ
Voter # - ?

NinjaKoopa33
~The Koopa Clan~

POKEMANMASTER responds:

Thanks

Cool!

Hehe, remember me? I was browsing through the Flash Portal and whaddya know? I notice that Pt2's out! :D

Nice use of effects here. Love the intro. I see the "Sonic the Hedgehog" logo come up, along with the original opening music. Then all of a sudden I see Dark Sonic crashing through! Haha....nice XD

Good choice of music! "Final Zone" for the opening works nice, and the metal and techno music you used for the fight scenes were pretty good.

You explained what had happened to Tails. It's good that that got cleared up from the last episode, but it just seemed way too short. I would have figured that Tails would have put up a fight at least rather than dying so easily.

As for the battle between Mecha Sonic and Sonic, it was pretty good. Nice use of visual effects and sound effects! Still though, it seemed a little short. While I don't like a battle to drag on, I also don't like a battle that ends so quickly.

Still good nonetheless. Can't wait 'till Part 3! :D

Voting Details: Current Score - 2.77
Voted 5 - raised to 2.79
Voter # - 259

For its file size, I would have expected a lot more. These need to be longer.

NinjaKoopa33
~The Koopa Clan~

gamefreak20000 responds:

Well no offense to Tails but I think he couldn't really put up a decent fight because he relies on technology as a crutch so that's why I chose to have him killed so easily. Not only that but he was caught off guard.

P.S. I do remember you and I still appreciate your support! Keep a weather eye out for my news updates and you shall not miss it when part 3 is finished!

Nice....

Pretty good for your first Flash movie!

The music really fits well with the movie. You got facial expressions down. Overall, a good movie!

A different ending than what I thought would've happened. At least he got his revenge! XD

The only thing I would think to improve on is the character's walking. When the Zookeeper was walking, it just wasn't realistic. Work on making the character's movement more smoothly.

Voting Details: Current Score - Under Judgement
Voted 5 - UJ
Voter # - ?

Great first movie! Hope to see more from you!

NinjaKoopa
~The Koopa Clan~

RaccoonRat responds:

Thanks for the review! Yea the walk cycles were the hardest part.

THEUSERninjakoopa-33FUCKSPIGS?

Hehe, I see. Real funny, talking about me. You're messing with the wrong guy pal.

Ninjakoopa
~The Koopa Clan~

FlashCrusaders responds:

Wut are you talking about?

Good work! ^^

First off, I think you need to explain your story. It's obvious that Tails died, but you need to show events explaining what happened.
Second, like Tev2nice said, when Sonic moves, he walks off the ground. It's a small detail, but it's very important that characters stay on the ground when walking.
Third, when Sonic was talking to himself, it seemed a little slow. Try speeding up just a bit, and maybe include some background music as well.
Last one, when you use music from the Audio Portal, include them under the Audio section. It's good you credit them in the end, but be sure to include their songs in the Audio Credits.

(Now, for some compliments!)

The first thing I notice is your start screen. The Chaos Emerald was a really nice touch, and your custom character looked pretty cool. Nice!
The fight scene was well done, even if it was DBZ-style. The one thing I see in every fight is characters turning super. That's overused, but was still good! :D
Another thing I like is what you did with Mecha-Sonic's dialogue. Scanning, finding solutions, confirming targets, it really fits a robot's dialogue. Well done!

Overall, you got some good animating skills, you just need to improve.
Can't wait for Pt. 2! ^^
5/5 and 9/10!
~Ninjakoopa-33

gamefreak20000 responds:

I respect your comments except about Tails. I've told this to many, many people, it's for part 2. It will all make sense when I finish it then.

this deserves an award!

Like pretty much eveyone has already said, the Pikachu part freezes.

Besides that, it was an awesome piece of work! While some scenes weren't that funny to me, others were just simply hilarious!
I can't really choose a favorite, since they're all just awesome! :D

What I really like about this is how well you put this all together. Scene select, artist profiles, and even easter eggs! ^^

As for people, like newguy2005, I don't get how you could give such a low rating for this. It's hilarious, and you know it.

Oh yeah, I demand Sprite TV 4!
(and include me ^^)

Credits to all involved!
5/5 and 10/10!
~Ninjakoopa-33

TITROTU responds:

Thanks. :)

meh...

First off, why did you include Geno in the icon? It doesn't even have anything to do with this flash.

Okay, let's see here....

Your custom sprite is kinda cool, but still isn't good enough for this fight.
At times, Sonic was normal-sized, then he ended up changing sizes.

As for the Chaos Emerald, Sonic steals it from the other guy, but he still turns Super. Explain that.

Like getto89 said, there isn't any sound effects. Add some sound, don't just put in music. If it's a fight, you know it needs some kind of sound.
Also, like KyuubiT said, you need to put some effort into it. Make it a real fight, don't just put up 30 seconds worth of random fighting.

5/10 and 2/5
~Ninjakoopa-33

DevAwesome responds:

The custom character went super because he used the energy from what he absorbed from the emerald.

needs work

This has a Madness kind of look. If that's what you were going for, work on that. The character was just stiff. Add some movement and recoil from the gun.
I don't think stick figures and Madness-looking guys fit together in the same video.
Make the animation more smooth, so increase frame rate.

~Ninjakoopa-33

m103904 responds:

ok i will try that so when yo see my next one it will have that stuff

it is better

I admit, you did improve on this. The problem is, you need to make something longer, not just a 10 second short. I say, if you're going to sumbit something, at least make it over a minute or two. You could make this into a story, though.

~Ninjakoopa-33

Upgrade405 responds:

Told you so. :D And I will probably turn this into a series one day.

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