Hehe, I see. Real funny, talking about me. You're messing with the wrong guy pal.
~The Koopa Clan~
Wut are you talking about?
Nice video! I loled at every scene. The part was Louis kept getting in the way was hilarious. And you say that actually happened to you? XD
I liked the whole video, though I would like to point out a couple of spelling mistakes. You spelled "Frienly Fire" and "teamates". They should be spelled "Friendly Fire" and "teammates".
Besides that, I love this video! Definitely one of the funniest I've seen!
5/5 and 10/10!
Yoshi's soooo cute! ^^
It's a nice animation, but as FaltaViva said, you should've done your own backgrounds. It would look a lot better with drawn backgrounds rather than some images you found online.
As for sounds, you need a better sound quality. Some sounds come up a little fuzzy.
Voting Details: Current Score - 3.27
Voted 4 (raised to 3.29)
Voter # - 253
A nice animation, and a good choice of music.
4/5 and 8/10
Man, you're doing pretty good with Super Sprite Shorts!
The animation is pretty good, though there are some problems.
During the Magnetman scene, the sprites were blurry, and the camera was too far away. Zoom in, and make the sprites clearer.
Same thing during the Luigi scene. The sprite was blurry, which was how all the sprites were during the animation.
Please try to fix that.
As for your jokes, they're pretty funny IMO.
My only problem would have to be is that not every scene was funny.
Try to make every scene as hilarious as possible.
One thing I would add is some background music. If you feel it isn't necessary, don't worry about it, though I would consider it.
Voting Details: 3.53
Voted 5 - 3.56
Voter # - 315
Looking forward to your next volume! ^^
Note: On your next Sprite Short, try to keep the sprites clear, not blurry. It will definitely improve your animations.
Note 2: The best joke was the 1-Up Pursuit scene IMO!
Good work! ^^
First off, I think you need to explain your story. It's obvious that Tails died, but you need to show events explaining what happened.
Second, like Tev2nice said, when Sonic moves, he walks off the ground. It's a small detail, but it's very important that characters stay on the ground when walking.
Third, when Sonic was talking to himself, it seemed a little slow. Try speeding up just a bit, and maybe include some background music as well.
Last one, when you use music from the Audio Portal, include them under the Audio section. It's good you credit them in the end, but be sure to include their songs in the Audio Credits.
(Now, for some compliments!)
The first thing I notice is your start screen. The Chaos Emerald was a really nice touch, and your custom character looked pretty cool. Nice!
The fight scene was well done, even if it was DBZ-style. The one thing I see in every fight is characters turning super. That's overused, but was still good! :D
Another thing I like is what you did with Mecha-Sonic's dialogue. Scanning, finding solutions, confirming targets, it really fits a robot's dialogue. Well done!
Overall, you got some good animating skills, you just need to improve.
Can't wait for Pt. 2! ^^
5/5 and 9/10!
I respect your comments except about Tails. I've told this to many, many people, it's for part 2. It will all make sense when I finish it then.
this deserves an award!
Like pretty much eveyone has already said, the Pikachu part freezes.
Besides that, it was an awesome piece of work! While some scenes weren't that funny to me, others were just simply hilarious!
I can't really choose a favorite, since they're all just awesome! :D
What I really like about this is how well you put this all together. Scene select, artist profiles, and even easter eggs! ^^
As for people, like newguy2005, I don't get how you could give such a low rating for this. It's hilarious, and you know it.
Oh yeah, I demand Sprite TV 4!
(and include me ^^)
Credits to all involved!
5/5 and 10/10!
First off, why did you include Geno in the icon? It doesn't even have anything to do with this flash.
Okay, let's see here....
Your custom sprite is kinda cool, but still isn't good enough for this fight.
At times, Sonic was normal-sized, then he ended up changing sizes.
As for the Chaos Emerald, Sonic steals it from the other guy, but he still turns Super. Explain that.
Like getto89 said, there isn't any sound effects. Add some sound, don't just put in music. If it's a fight, you know it needs some kind of sound.
Also, like KyuubiT said, you need to put some effort into it. Make it a real fight, don't just put up 30 seconds worth of random fighting.
5/10 and 2/5
The custom character went super because he used the energy from what he absorbed from the emerald.
Not that funny, but still pretty good.
First off, what's the deal with the Katimari ball rolling around? It could've been funnier if you added some sound to it.
And at that part where Luigi shot Mario, you need to work with the sound effects. They were late, and even the music didn't fit well with that scene.
I gotta say though, you had a cool intro!
7/10 and 3/5.
This has a Madness kind of look. If that's what you were going for, work on that. The character was just stiff. Add some movement and recoil from the gun.
I don't think stick figures and Madness-looking guys fit together in the same video.
Make the animation more smooth, so increase frame rate.
ok i will try that so when yo see my next one it will have that stuff
couple of suggestions
When the stick figure, threw the grenade, he didn't pull off the ring (whatever its called). Even a small detail helps.
Also, when he breaks the roof of the car, there's no sound. Add some kind of sound, like glass breaking.
Create a background for you video, don't use what's off your camera.
Explosions? Try finding some kind of image, and do the same for the grenade.
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