it is better
I admit, you did improve on this. The problem is, you need to make something longer, not just a 10 second short. I say, if you're going to sumbit something, at least make it over a minute or two. You could make this into a story, though.
~Ninjakoopa-33
Told you so. :D And I will probably turn this into a series one day.
how to improve (look below)
During the battle, the red guy was shooting bullets, but he didn't have a gun.
Make a better background to go along with this short.
See if you can make the stick figures move more smoothly.
At least make it longer. I'd say around 2 minutes at a minimum.
~Ninjakoopa-33
Thanks for the advice
needs a lot of work
1. You need to color the drawings, don't leave it black & white
2. No sounds, no songs, no nothing!
3. Make it easier to read text, don't just scribble
4. Add more information in your comments
that's it
~Ninjakoopa-33
Awesome!
I gotta say, you did another awesome job with Luigi's Hammer!
Keep up the good work!
5/5 and 10/10!
(P.S. Thanks for crediting me at the end! Can't wait for your next work.)
cool!
good video. I agree with icecold128. Do one with Luigi. Anyways, awesome video.
Keep up the good work!
5/5 and 10/10!
cool!
dude, I can't stop watching this video! Just listening to this song makes me want to play Super Mario RPG. (kinda wish I had the game though...) And you did this in High School!? That's just awesome!
5/5 and 10/10!
Unstoppable?
yeah right. LOL at ending. Keep up the good work!
5/5 and 10/10
Metal Gears for sale!
Awesome video. One thing, though, is that this really isn't as funny as your other videos. Still a good flash, so keep up the good work!
9/10 and 4/5!
Yep, guess that I didn't write this as hilarious as the others.
Thanks for the review though.
oh god....
LOL!!!!!
man, this is just AWESOME!
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The Wrong Game 
Red & Black -short- 
Luigi's hammer 
Mario's hammer 
Mario RPG: Rawest Forest 
Sonic the Unstoppable 
Metal Gear: Cheater 
Awesome Gaiden